英语简历改错,帮我看看下面一段文章有什么语法错误或是其它什么问题,请我改正下,Dear Sir or Madam,I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in newspaper interested me because the position that you described sounds exactly like the kind of job i am seeking Notonly do I have the qualifications for this job,but I also have the right personality for a sales manager.On the one and,I have worked as a sales representative at NBT Electronics for nearly three years.On the

英语简历改错,帮我看看下面一段文章有什么语法错误或是其它什么问题,请我改正下,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in newspaper interested me because the position that you described sounds exactly like the kind of job i am seeking
Notonly do I have the qualifications for this job,but I also have the right personality for a sales manager.On the one and,I have worked as a sales representative at NBT Electronics for nearly three years.On the other hand,During my senior year of college,I had a part-time job as a clerk at J&C music store.I am good at creating spreadsheets and making webpages,and I can speak French fluently.
Should you grant me a personal interview,I would be most grateful.If you need to know more about me,please feel free to contact me at any time at (740) 555-3416.Thank you for considering my application,and I am looking forward to meeting you.
Yours sincerely
Justin Smith