英语大神们,帮我看看这句有没有语法问题.We continued to renovate dilapidated houses in rural areas, ensured the safety of potable water for 63.98 million additional rural residents, delivered electricity to 600,000 people in areas that had no power supply, and further improved rural working and living conditions.这些并列的句子中间为什么可以只用逗号连接呢?

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英语大神们,帮我看看这句有没有语法问题.
We continued to renovate dilapidated houses in rural areas, ensured the
safety of potable water for 63.98 million additional rural residents,
delivered electricity to 600,000 people in areas that had no power
supply, and further improved rural working and living conditions.
这些并列的句子中间为什么可以只用逗号连接呢?

continued, ensured, delivered and improved 是并列的谓语,所以用逗号连接
句子没有语法错误

没问题啊!

没有语法问题.
这些并列的不是句子,是谓语动词及其宾语.最后还有个 and 断后.

语法没有问题 但是把 that had no power supply改成 without power supply比较好