英语翻译开头想好了,麻烦高手帮忙翻译后面的2句,这么说,Good afternoon!It's a pleasure to meet you all.First let me introduce myself.My name is XXX.I am 22 years old.我是个开朗的女孩,平时喜欢听歌,看书.我有过2年的销售经验,希望可以胜任这份工作.I am a lively girl.I like reading books and listening to music第一句，这样是对的吗？

I am a girl of open minded. I like listening to music and reading books in my spare time. I have rich experience of selling. Should you be willing to take me on trial, I would try my best to fulfill all your requirements.

i am a positive and happy girl,i like listening musics and reading books.i have 2 years sale experiences,i hope my qualities can be competent for this job.
thank you

我今天问了一下我的美国外教老师,他给了我意见
你的介绍要多一点定语从句.例如"I am 22 years old.
我是个开朗的女孩，平时喜欢听歌，看书。
我有过2年的销售经验，希望可以胜任这份工作。"应该做一些分析.具体的翻译参考下面:
I'm a sonsy(开朗的)girl of 22 years old who have
a distribution experiences of 2 years.
sometimes I would like to sang and do some reading and I hope I can be competent for the job
这是我自己整理的翻译顺序,根据你的需要,你可以自己修改一下翻译顺序的

i'm a girl who like smiling, reading and listening the music.
i have two years of experience of sale, so i think that this job is very fit to me~~

I am a open and bright girl,usually likes music,reads.I have had 2 years sales experience,hoped may be competent this work.