初一下册英语第八单元作文老吉姆上个月过地很不开心,上个星期我到他家去陪他帮他做了一些事.要用到clean the house piay chess play the guitar go to the movie cook dinner （全用过去时） 开头是on last weekend,ivisited old jim.

Last week, I visited old Jim.Jim didn't feel happy last month.So I helped do something. We played chess, played ruitar.After that, we went to the movie.Finally, we cooked dinner.He felt better after all the activities. And I felt very happy, too.

上一篇作文的回答者有些地方要注意细节错误 如 last weekend, I felt very happy,because I visited old Jim and do some things for him.
I did much housework for him ,such as cleaning the house,sweeping the floor and so on.Old Jim likede to play chess or the guitar.So I palyed them with him.Sometimes I won,sometimes he won.It was very interesting.In the afternoon,I went to the movie with him.It was a very interesting movie we all laughed.I also made dinner for him in the evening.
What a meaningful day I had!

On last weekend,I felt very happy,because I visited old Jim and do some thing for him.I did many housework for him like,clean the house,swept the floor and so on.Old Jim like to play chess and play th...