请帮我看看这篇英语文章有没有语法错误 急Wing is one of my best friends who are very smart and stylish girl.We met in our high school where we have spent our happy hour there.However,she is the most knowledgeable person that I’ve ever known.No matter what I ask,she can always find a perfect answer in her brilliant brain.Wing is also very kind.She’s used to taking care of some dogs whose legs are badly hurt.What’s more she is also very multi-talent.For example,she is good

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请帮我看看这篇英语文章有没有语法错误 急
Wing is one of my best friends who are very smart and stylish girl.We met in our high school where we have spent our happy hour there.However,she is the most knowledgeable person that I’ve ever known.No matter what I ask,she can always find a perfect answer in her brilliant brain.Wing is also very kind.She’s used to taking care of some dogs whose legs are badly hurt.What’s more she is also very multi-talent.For example,she is good at dancing and playing the base.Because both of us are music fans,we have a band .She is the base player and I’m the guitar player.We used to perform in our school party,which is really exciting.Although we’re in different school now ,we also call each other twice a week to maintain our friendship.

she's used to take care of

who is a very smart
we met in high school就可以了
where we spent our happy time together
最好不要用however,怪怪的
没有multi-talent.可以用she has lots of accomplishments表示多才多艺
play the bass.
which was realling exciting
different schools
最后一句最好改成because。。。we call each other...

Wing is one of my best friends who are very smart and stylish girl.are 改成is ,添上a / / 或者girl改成girls(如果是一篇改错,就按规矩来,一行一个错)We met in our high school where we have spent our happy ...

We used to perform in our school party 应该是paties吧
Although we’re in different school now , 是schools吧
what's more后加逗号
which is really exciting中 is最好为was