本人英语不好,希望大家把这英语改下,它是病句～how can you hurt my heart?Love me,please deep love.
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本人英语不好,希望大家把这英语改下,它是病句～
how can you hurt my heart?
Love me,
please deep love.
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How could you hurt me so?
Please love me, love me deeply.
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how can you hurt me like this? (how can you break my heart like this?)
Please love me, and love me deep.
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第一句和tot319一样吧,中文的"你怎么能伤我的心"可不能按中文的思维方式直译,当翻译为英语时应为"你为什么伤我的心?"
-"Why do you break my heart?"
第二句您的意思是"如果爱我,请深爱..."这个?
如果是的话,我觉得翻译应为
-If you love me ,please love (me) deeply.
答
Why do you break my heart?
Love me and put me into your deepest heart,please/will you ?