hey,boy,where are you going?.....sorry,I don't konw.oh,that's ok...everyone stay at here because they haven't known where to go........you are sad,aren't you?I guess the cause,ah,may be a lady?...no,I'm sad just because I don't know how to forget....can you teach me that?....no,it's a pity that I can't.you have to learn it by yourself.谢谢1L君的回答，咱感激不尽~作为一个中学生写英文是很痛苦的，咱能不能跟你私聊慢慢请教，请你多多包涵。
问题描述：
hey,boy,where are you going?
.....sorry,I don't konw.
oh,that's ok...everyone stay at here because they haven't known where to go.
.......
you are sad,aren't you?I guess the cause,ah,may be a lady?
...no,I'm sad just because I don't know how to forget....can you teach me that?
....no,it's a pity that I can't.you have to learn it by yourself.
谢谢1L君的回答，咱感激不尽~
作为一个中学生写英文是很痛苦的，咱能不能跟你私聊慢慢请教，请你多多包涵。
答
here是副词，前面不加介词的，所以不能有at,stay要加s,还有，如果把known改成decided,貌似会更好
答
.sorry,I don't konw.
逻辑上很少如此.
改成
Well,just lingering here.
后面的“everyone stays ”也不好,如果真要说,用Everybody,动词吗,当然单数第三人称了.
第二段勉强吧.典型的国人式思维吧.