请帮我看看这则英语短文有语法问题吗?I've a friend.Her name's Saily.She's clever、funny and lovely!She likes vegetables but she doesn't like meat.It's a fine day.We're going to zoo.She likes pandas.Because pandas is lovely.She is sad because she can't touch the pandas.But she like doves,too.She feeds the doves.Saily is clever.She can dance,she can sing,she can paly computer.Saily loves me like my little sister.She understands me.When I'm sad,she knows how to make me feel

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请帮我看看这则英语短文有语法问题吗?
I've a friend.Her name's Saily.She's clever、funny and lovely!She likes vegetables but she doesn't like meat.It's a fine day.We're going to zoo.She likes pandas.Because pandas is lovely.She is sad because she can't touch the pandas.But she like doves,too.She feeds the doves.Saily is clever.She can dance,she can sing,she can paly computer.Saily loves me like my little sister.She understands me.When I'm sad,she knows how to make me feel better.She likes to stay with me.Sailt is my best friend.No friend can replace she.

I have a friend.Her name's Saily.She's clever, funny and lovely!She likes vegetable, but she doesn't like meat. 第二段应该都用过去时 Because pandas is lovely is改are Saily loves me like my little sister. like 改as 小学五年级写的这样不错了。其中重复说了个clever. Saily is clever.She can dance,she can sing,she can paly computer.这个她的个人介绍也可以放在第一段

1.pandas is lovely 要么the panda is 要么 pandas are 后面也是,注意单复数和特指的名词的用法 2 最后一个,she改her,注意主和宾的用法