英语翻译要短一点的!

问题描述:

英语翻译
要短一点的!

I stand on the snow covered mountain
Colorful vase of flowers
Slopes with flower beds laden
I saw the snow lotus flowers
I asked,“Why are you all alone here?
Beauty is meant to be adored.
Should give yourself to somebody
Before your petals fall to dust soon,dear.
What if I crushed your petals,I asked
As at these heights,you are quite lonely”..
这首诗的押韵是 ababcdecde
我的翻译也是 ababcdecde
我站在白雪皑皑的山上
满山都是五颜六色的花
满载花坛的斜坡上
我看见的是雪莲花
我问:“为何你们孤芳自赏?
你们的美丽应该万流景仰
应该把自己奉献给某个人
在花瓣凋零之前让人欣赏
如我压碎你的花瓣会怎样
在这高地上你们不染纤尘