英语作文 a fantastic experience 80字~不可以有任何语法错误!水平不用太高,初一、二水平就好不行啊老大，我英语很好，怎么可以说我是一个 poor student of english

I was once a poor student of english in my middle school time, and I still remember the experience of my first English testing. I faild and my teacher made me stand on the platform in the classroom. Form that time , I promised myself that will study English well even if I didn't like it anymore. But, My method of English learning is inefficient . Remember new words one by one and few times reading and listenning. I got a satisfied score in my final test, but I found I can not speak English at all. I am still learning English.

I was once a poor student of english in my middle school time, and I still remember the experience of my first English testing. I faild and my teacher made me stand on the platform in the classroom. Form that time , I promised myself that will study English well even if I didn't like it anymore. But,My method of English learning is inefficient . Remember new words one by one and few times reading and listenning. I got a satisfied score in my final test, but I found I can not speak English at all, I'm still learning English. It was cool. After supper, I went to the library. I had a good time in the reading room. On my way home, I found a small boy crying at the corner. He said he lost his money so he couldn’t go home. I asked him not to be worried .Then I took out 5 yuan and give it to him. He thanked me and took a taxi home happily .Suddenly, I found there was no money with me. I couldn’t afford the bus ticket. So it took me 40 minutes to go home on foot. When I got home, I was very tired but happy. So I thought it was a fantastic experience for me, and for the boy, too.

你初二对吧？我试写一篇，不知道合不合你的水平，不适当的自己调整。请过目：
A fantastic experience
China is getting more and more popular. People from all over the world come to China every year. Luckily,I met some the other day.
This is my first time to communicate with foreigners. They are really different! Yellow hair, blue eyes, white skin... But what impressed me most was their good manner. I finally understood why British men called themselves "gentlemen".
But most importantly, my English has improved a lot since then! Talking with foreigners might be a good way to learn English besides studying in class.
This is a fantastic experience that i would never forget.

我的是原创的~~~
The last summer vacation, I and my dad went to Hunan's relatives to play. There 's the very next day, cousin to take me to the scene to see a name called happy base camp variety show. That is just I like the star of Zhang Jie be a guest. Can really see him I feel very happy. I think it is a wonderful experience
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上一个暑假，我跟爸爸去了湖南的亲戚家玩。去到那里的第二天，表哥带我去现场看了一个名字叫快乐大本营的综艺节目。那天刚好是我最喜欢的明星张杰做嘉宾。能够真正看到他我感到很开心。我认为这是个奇妙的经历。

A fantastic experience
I was once a poor student of english in my middle school time,and I still remember the experience of my first English testing.I faild and my teacher made me stand on the platform in the classroom.Form that time ,I promised myself that will study English well even if I didn't like it anymore.But,My method of English learning is inefficient .Remember new words one by one and few times reading and listenning.I got a satisfied score in my final test,but I found I can not speak English at all.I am still learning English.
A fantastic Experience
It was cool.After supper,I went to the library.I had a good time in the reading room.On my way home,I found a small boy crying at the corner.He said he lost his money so he couldn’t go home.I asked him not to be worried .Then I took out 5 yuan and give it to him.He thanked me and took a taxi home happily .Suddenly,I found there was no money with me.I couldn’t afford the bus ticket.So it took me 40 minutes to go home on foot.When I got home,I was very tired but happy.So I thought it was a fantastic experience for me,and for the boy,too.
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