求英语大神帮我检查一下这个句子的语法错.Due to the fall of national animation industry,foreign animation production had dominated Chinese animation market in the 1990s and the early 2000s.In 2005,domestic animation had only an 11% market share.老师批改说有一个冠词错误和一个关于可数不可数的错误.

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求英语大神帮我检查一下这个句子的语法错.
Due to the fall of national animation industry,foreign animation production had dominated Chinese animation market in the 1990s and the early 2000s.In 2005,domestic animation had only an 11% market share.
老师批改说有一个冠词错误和一个关于可数不可数的错误.

foreign animation production --the foreign animation productions
an 11% market share是对的
Chinese animation market --- the Chinese animation market