比较自己现在和原来的变化 英语作文带上你的标题和你的正文 别用be used to 和完成时态

Compare I am now and before what's different?
Now,I am not be lazy.If I have a dream.I will realize it.Use the right way.But before,I have many dream,every dream I also want to realize it.Later I know,I am normal person.I couldn't do that.For example:When I am a child girl,my painting is very well,but haven't painting,I couldn't do anything.I just good at painting.I haven't patient,except the painting.And the later,I went to work,I knew that,study is very important things to me.So I came to the school,and continue to study.And my mother always speak:You must concentrate on doing one things.So I accept it.And correct it.Now I also still have many problem.My social experience haven't too much,my English just studied a basic,and so on.I think I need time to study more things.But I think ,I have the patient now.I think I am different before,and I like this change.
中文翻译：
比较以前的我和现在的我有什么不同?
现在的我不那么懒惰.如果我有一个梦想.我将会去实现它.用正确的方法.但是以前,我有很多梦想,每个梦想我却都要去实现它.后来,我知道了,我是一个普通人.我不能够做那么多事情.举个例子：当我还是个小女孩的时候,我的画画非常的好.但是如果我不画画,我却什么都不能做.我就只是擅长于画画.除了画画,我做其他事情都没有耐心.但是后来,我去工作了,我才明白了学习对我的重要性.我回到了学校,继续学习.并且,在那个时候,我的母亲一直跟我说：你应该学习集中注意力做一件事情.所以,我接受了她的意见,并且改正了这个坏习惯.现在,我也还是有许多问题.我的社会经验不多,我的英语也只是学习了一个基础,等等.我认为,我需要时间去学习更多的东西.但是,我认为,我现在做事情有了耐心.我想,这就是现在的我和以前的我的不同之处了.并且,我喜欢这样的改变.