帮我修改英语作文 Dear parents,thank you for your self-giving love As the time went,I grow up gently and leavr my hometown for making a living,so the opporunity to contact with both of them is less and less.But I always believe thay my parents will love me forever.When I was young,my home is expecially poor.So my father have to stay on a stange land for earning bread to ours family.And my mather raise our theer brothers to maturity self.When I was in the hige

Dear parents,thank you for your SELFLESS love
As the time GOES BY ,I grow up GRADUALLY and HAVE TO leavE my hometown for making a living, so the opporunity to contact both of them is GETTING less and less.But I always believe thay my parents will love me forever.
When I was young,my home WAS EXCEPTIONALLY poor.So my father haD to stay on a stRange land for earning bread FOR OUR family.And my mather raiseD our THREE brothers to maturity BY HERself.
When I was in the hige school,my parents workded hardER in order to get more money TO SUPPORT MY study.although they usually haD to get up early to work and late off work.,they never haD any complainTS.only hopING that I COULD have a good achievemEnt.
Then I went to the senior hige school in wher
e I haD to depart from my hometwon to study,it meanT my parents HAD TO pay more monney for my school work.
Three years lateR,I went to the college in the city of Foshan,it WAS all knowN that the tuition WAS so dear that a great number of people COULDN'T pay for it in china.But I never forgot the words,hard to learn tuition WAS not a problem, my parents TOLD me when I wound be off my family to the college.
At present,I have graduted from the medical college,and to be a doctor.Involuntarily,I am longing for giving them the money each month,however,my AGE is too low to send any money back home.Essentially, I ought to go back home for the compotation in the spring festival,at last,that days I will be on duty.my dear parents I hope both of YOU willl be healthY everyday. Your son.

Dear parents,thank you for your self-giving love
As the time went by,I grow up gently and leave my hometown for making a living, so the opporunity to contact with both of them is less and less.But I always believe that my parents will love me forever.
When I was young,my family was expecially poor.So my father had to stay on a stange land for earning bread to our family.And my mother raised our three brothers to maturity self.
When I was in the high school,my parents worked more hard and endeavor in order to get more money afford me to study.although they usually had to get up early to work and late off work.,they never had any complain.only hope that I can have a good achievemnt.
Then I went to the senior high school in which I had to depart from my hometwon to study,it was mean my parents must to pay more money for my school work.
Three years late,I went to the college in the city of foshan,it is all know that the tuition is so dear that a great number of people cann’t pay for it in china.But I never forgot the words,hard to learn tuition is not a problem, my parents tell me when I wound be off my family to the college.
At present,I have graduted from the medical college,and to be a doctor.Involuntarily,I am longing for giving them the money each month,however,my gage is too low to send any few of money back home.Essentially, I ought to go back home for the compotation in the spring festival,at last,that days I will be on duty.my dear parents I hope both of you willl be health everyday. Your son.
ok改完了,你时态好多用错了,有些单词也拼错了

Dear parents,thank you for your self-giving love.(既然不是写给你父母的信这句话就没有必要了,或者改为I want to thank my parents for their self-giving love.) As the (the 去掉)time went,I grow（grew,过去...