英语翻译还有我是初三的英语考试作文15分,但我才拿几分.要怎么样才可以写好点.

Passage 1:
With the development of the computer technology,the internet is becoming more and more popular.You can find computers and the internet nearly everywhere in our life,work and study.Even,the internet is becoming one of the most important parts in our social life.But, some young people,especially some of the students, are too addicted to the net surfing.They spend too much time on the games, chatting,movie seeing and even shopping online.That will not be good, even harmful for their hearts,health and their attitude towards the world,only because the internet is so complicated that it is not easy for the young people to control themselves.
Passage 2:
With the development of the internet,more and more people send cards of different kinds with E-mail on the internet.Comparing with the traditional cards,the digital cards are much more interesting and lively.There can be some pictures,cartoons,flashes and different sounds.Meanwhile,the cards on the internet can be transmitted at a very high speed.With different addresses.you can send different cards.Suppose you are not interested in cards,you can also design the style of your own with certain software.With the popularity of the digital cards on the internet,we can get rid of the traditional cards which are made of paper.In this way, we can save lots of wood.It should be regarded as a contribution to the preservation of the environment.
Passage 3:
With the development of the computer technology and the internet,we have got a new media to know the outside world.And our life is greatly changed with it.On the internet,you can get both the domestic news and the international news as well.For our daily communication, you can send E-mails to your friends and the other people.Of course,you can study whatever you like on the internet,such as, English and other subjects.Meanwhile,you can appreciate music,sports and enjoy the video games.Recently,more and more people,especially young people,are interested in shopping online.Anyway,internet is changing our style of life and the way of thinking as well.