Last summer ,my parents and i went camping trip.I was very excited.Because this is appreciated a a 第一次写,可能不好,请大家多多指教,将错误改出来.谢谢了Last summer ,my parents and i was went camping .I was very excited.Because this is my first time camping.we got on the train,all appreciated a lot of scenery.we arrived at a small jungle.there are many plants,they are closely.we along with instructor has found a good rest.early the next morning.we started camping."oh!you have

Last summer ,my parents and i （went out for a hiking）.
I was very excited（, because） this is （the first camping in my lifetime）.
（We） got on the train, all （appreciating：做说明作用的状语，且是主动句，所以改成ing词尾） a lot of scenery.（或者： ...train, and all appreciated a lot of...）
（Finally：加上一个时间状语“终于”表示时间发展顺序比较好）,we arrived at a （woods）.（woods是树林，比较小的；jungle是原始热带丛林的意思啊～～）
There （were）many plants,（which）（were）（close to us）.
Along with （the）instructor，we （had） a （really）good rest.
The next day, early （in）the morning，our camping (started).
"Oh!You have a big tent!"a little girl said (to me).
She (was) about 7 or 8 years old.
She (said that she) (came) from Nanjing(,and that) she (enjoyed) making friends (with more people).
(Her) name was Sea. She was a pretty girl.
From (then) on, we became good friends.
(How time flied!) /Time passed quickly.
But I was very (happy), because I made a new friend.

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Last summer,I went to camping trip with my parents. I was very excited.Because this was my first time camping.
去年夏天，我去野营和我的父母。我很激动，因为这是我第一次野营。
appreciate vt 欣赏,赏识。 好像不会很激动吧。呵呵

去年夏天,我的父母和我去露营。我非常兴奋。
因为这是欣赏

括号内是改正的～有问题可以再hi我楼主～Last summer ,my parents and i （went out for a hiking）.I was very excited（,because） this is （the first camping in my lifetime）.（We） got on the train,all （...

去掉trip.
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Last summer, my parents and I are going camping.I'm very excited
Because this is appreciated
去年夏天,我的父母和我去露营。我非常兴奋。
因为这是欣赏