英语短文改错题.10处错误.Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually.At about noon,I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help.I went up to see what was happening.I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything.Without any hesitation,I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat,but jumped into the water quickly.I manage
英语短文改错题.10处错误.
Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually.At about noon,I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help.I went up to see what was happening.I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything.Without any hesitation,I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat,but jumped into the water quickly.I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety.To his great relief,the kid was saved.
I was proud what I had done.I hope everyone can give hand when someone else is in need.
usually----usual
hear----heard
去掉up
shocking----shocked
peoples---people
去掉by
but---and
To---With
give hand---give a hand
1.usually 改为 usual；
2.hear 改为 heard；
3.shocking改为shocked；
4.peoples改为people；
5.had pushed 中去掉had；
6.but 改为and；
7.his 改为my；
8.proud 后面加 of；
9.hand 前加 a；
第十个找不到了，我记得以前做改错题10个里面有一个是打对号的。
楼主自己再检查检查。
1.as usual 2.while-when 3.hear-heard 4.shocking-shocked 5.i had pushed 中had去掉 6.but -and 7.carried-carry 8.to his great relief-my 9.proud of what 10.give a hand