英语翻译下周一(11/16)您会对我面试,首先很感谢您给我的机会!You will interview me next Monday,first of all,thanks for your good chance!请问当天您大概几点比较方便,我先预约对应时间的会议室.Excuse me,which time are you free that day,I will book the meeting room first!自己写出来的总感觉有点不大对头,呵呵,

First of all, Thanks for giving me a chance to have an interview next Monday.Could you tell me what's your convenience time at that day so that i can book the meeting room.
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没关系，多看看书 多练练就可以了。。呵呵
英语翻译不要太直板了。不然 很中国式。不一定要把每个词都翻译过来。
只要意思有翻译出来就可以了.
Thank you very much to give me this chance to interview you next Monday.
What time do you think is convenient for you? So I can book a room for our meeting.

Thank you very much for you give an interview to me next Monday(11/16).
Excuse me, what time do you think is convenient for you on that day ? So I can book a room for our meeting.
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I am apprecited to you give me a chance to interoduce myself
Is it convinent for you to you booking meeting room ?

.I'll have an interview with you next Monday.First of all,I'd like to say thank you for giving me such a good chance.I am wondering when you will be free that day.I can book a meeting room in advance.
你是在写信吗?最好注意下语气和上下文连接,不要显得太突兀.多用些语气词,显得礼貌谦逊些.