请问用英语这句话得怎么表达?我查询了相关的物流信息,发现物流信息停滞在5月9号这天.这是不正常的!能否请您联系一下当地邮局,看看包裹是否已经到达当地邮局?

I query the logistics information, logistics information on May 9th found. This is not normal! Could you please contact your local post office, have a look whether the package has arrived at the local post office?

I query the relevant logistics information,found in the stagnation of logistics information on May 9,This is not normal! Would you please contact the local post office, to see if the parcel has reached the local post office?

我查询了相关的物流信息,发现物流信息停滞在5月9号这天.这是不正常的!
能否请您联系一下当地邮局,看看包裹是否已经到达当地邮局?
I've already checked related logistic information,
and find it has no any more updating since May.9th,
definitely it's unusual!
To find out what's going on,
could you help give me a hand to contact local post office and inquire whether it had actually arrived there?