初中英语书面表达,帮忙!I'm going to be a doctor.字数60词左右

I'm going to be a doctor
If being asked what job I'll choose in the future,I'll say"I'm going to be a doctor"without hesitation.I used to suffer a lot that I could do nothing but waiting outside when my family members were in danger.Were I a doctor,not only could I help my closest relatives ,but I could help others in need as well! You can see that this job is of so much value.Therefore,I decided to be a doctor.
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I am going to be a doctor when I grow up.I can help lots of people and save them being a doctor.When I feel ill,doctors can always make me feel better so I admire them very much.Being a doctor must be patient and have a lot of knowledge.So from now on,I will study harder and harder.