英语作业,谁能帮我看看.Hey,Tim. I'm glad to receive your email. Your travel was so amazing and wonderful.In fact, I'm very eager to tell you that I've just returned from TianJin(SP)(>>Tianjin) in China.We tasted a lot of delicous(SP)(>>delicious) snack and visited lots of famous places.After we saw a movie, Cold Mountain, filled with affecting actions.We were deeply affected by the hero who doesn't give up earning his truth love in the war.Up to now, I still rem
英语作业,谁能帮我看看.
Hey,
Tim. I'm glad to receive your email. Your travel was so amazing and wonderful.
In fact, I'm very eager to tell you that I've just returned from TianJin(SP)(>>Tianjin) in China.
We tasted a lot of delicous(SP)(>>delicious) snack and visited lots of famous places.
After we saw a movie, Cold Mountain, filled with affecting actions.
We were deeply affected by the hero who doesn't give up earning his truth love in the war.
Up to now, I still remember a song's name in the movie, 'I wish my baby was born'.
All in all, our travel were great.
I hope we will have a dinner at the weekend.
嘿,Tim ,很高兴收到你的邮件。你的旅行太吸引人太棒了。
事实上,我正急着要告诉你我刚从中国天津旅行回来。
我们品尝了那里的特色小吃,参观了很多著名的地方。
在我们看了一部感人的动作电影《冷山》之后,我们被主人公在战争中坚持不放弃赢得真爱所深深的感动。 到现在,我仍然记得电影中歌曲的名字'I wish my baby was born'(《哀悼遇难的孩子们》)。总之,我们的旅行非常棒。
我希望周末我们能共进晚餐。
嗨!提姆,很高兴收到你的邮件。你的旅行是如此的精彩,真是太棒了。我很想告诉你我刚刚从中国的天津旅行回来。我们品尝了很多美味的特色小吃并且参观了很多名胜古迹。随后,我们看了一部感人至深的电影《冷山》。主人公在战争中仍不放弃追求真爱的精神深深打动了我们。直到现在,我仍然记得电影中的一首插曲 I wish my baby was born 。总之,我们的旅行很棒。我提议咱们周末一起吃顿饭怎么样。
第五行 filled 改为 filling 修饰 movie
第六行 doesn't 改为过去式
第七行 I still remember a song's name in the movie, 'I wish my baby was born'.改为I still remember the song in the movie named I wish my baby was born.歌名斜体
最后一行 改为 at this weekend
嘿,
蒂姆。我很高兴收到你的电子邮件。你的旅行是如此的不可思议而精彩。
事实上,我迫不及待想告诉你,我刚从中国天津回来。
我们品尝了许多好吃的小吃,参观了许多名胜。
我们看了一部叫《冷山》的电影,情节非常动人。
我们被英雄即使在战争中也不放弃追求他真爱的伟大精神深深感动了。
到现在,我还记得这部电影中一首歌的名字——我希望我的婴儿诞生。
总之,我们的旅行都是有趣的。
我希望我们周末能一起吃个晚饭。
1\Your travel 是不是逻辑上不对啊?后边可是出现的our travel 2、Tianjin是对的3、very eager 可以删掉very ,eager已经很强烈了4、 After改为then,或者after that5\earning love 搭配不合适,purse 是不是好些6、a so...
嗨,Tim,很高兴收到了你发的信息。你的旅途是如此的令人惊奇和精彩。事实上,我非常渴望去告诉你我刚从中国的天津回来,我们尝了很多美味的小吃,还参观了许多著名的旅游胜地。在我们看完了(COLD MOUTIAN)这部电影之后,我们感触很大,我们深深的被他那种在战争中誓死不放弃真爱的英雄气概打动了。直到现在,我仍然记得这部电影中的一首歌“I wish my baby was born”。总的来说,我们的旅途真的是好极了,我希望我们在周末可以一起去吃晚餐。