进入了一个新的班级,急需一份英语的自我介绍给我一份在新班级里用英语的自我介绍姓名PETER 20岁 爱好唱歌,篮球,个人创业,非常喜欢英语,如果大家对英语有兴趣,一定要找我多多交流。学校用XX表示,这点信息请大家帮我融入介绍当中,另外我需要各位帮我美化1下自我介绍,比如开场词要先表示礼貌。结束语。

问题描述:

进入了一个新的班级,急需一份英语的自我介绍
给我一份在新班级里用英语的自我介绍
姓名PETER 20岁 爱好唱歌,篮球,个人创业,非常喜欢英语,如果大家对英语有兴趣,一定要找我多多交流。学校用XX表示,这点信息请大家帮我融入介绍当中,另外我需要各位帮我美化1下自我介绍,比如开场词要先表示礼貌。结束语。

..hello(goodmorning/goodafternoon0 everyone, im so glad to be here for this self-introducing. my name’s Peter. Im 20 years old. i like to spend my spare time to have fun with friends, so,wut I do is always playing basketball, singing and (surfing the internet你可以换其它的爱好). Im an ambitious person bcoz I ought to succeed my career in the future. Furthermore, im so crazy abo English, I like to practice english by talking to people, and I really appreciate to discuss with others if there is any difficulties. That’s all! Thank you for ur listening
你没说要写多少?,你可以自已加一些如果需要更长的话

Hello,everyone,I'm very happy to be one of the members of our new class. First of all, please allow me to introduce myself.
You can call me Peter.I'm a 20-year-old boy.As you see ,I'm a friendly person,and I'd like to make friends with all of you. I have many hobbys,such as singing and playing basketball. Making my own career is my dream. If you are interested in English, we can communicate to each other because I like English, too.
I wish our new family will be harmony.
That's all,thank you.

Hello!Everybody!My name is Lucia.My Chinese name is hanqi . I am 11 years old. I am in jiuzhen primary school.And I'm in Class One Grade Five. I like sports,Such as: Ping-Pong ball,run and so on. And I like English very much. I’m good at reading and writing. All of my classmates like to play with me. So I’m a happy girl now!
That’s all. Thank you!
改改就行了!

至少你得告诉一些你的基本情况啊 例如 名字 年龄 爱好 来自哪个学校 要不然怎么写啊?

您要多少字啊?新班级还要介绍学校?
Hello,everyone,I'm very glad to be one of the members of our new class.First of all,please allow me to introduce myself.
You can call me Peter.I'm a 20-year-old boy.As you see ,I'm a friendly person,and I'd like to make friends with all of you.I have many hobbys,such as singing and playing basketball.Making my own career is my dream.If you are interested in English,we can communicate to each other because I like English,too.
I wish our new family will be harmony.
That's all,thank you.