my mother always want to make me becoming a kind of people who are she wanted.这句话有错吗.我是想表达我妈妈总是想让我成为她想成为的那种人.

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my mother always want to make me becoming a kind of people who are she wanted.这句话有错吗.
我是想表达我妈妈总是想让我成为她想成为的那种人.

有错!my mother always wants(单三人称) me to become a person who will do everything in her mind. 再说了 make后面要用动词原型 所以becoming用的不对.再就是这句话本来就说的很别扭.是典型的中国式英语,外国人是不会这么表达的