再请教一下--when will you come to my house?---I will come here to see you when I returned from shanghai.这里用when怎么不对.

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再请教一下--when will you come to my house?
---I will come here to see you when I returned from shanghai.这里用when怎么不对.

应该用“so soon as”,译为“一...就...”此为最佳!
而when时间上感觉并不紧迫。

提得很好. when 表伴随时间状语(同时发生),但在这里而是先后时顺序.
应用once(一旦).