此句子有错吗?i could check that what you want to say is logical and it would also give youa chance to practice speaking.我想问的是 that what 这里,

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此句子有错吗?i could check that what you want to say is logical and it would also give you
a chance to practice speaking.
我想问的是 that what 这里,

个人觉得那个that 应该改为if或者whether,因为that引导表示陈述句的宾语从句,
  if和whether,whether...or not引导表示“是否”的一般疑问句的宾语从句.

what you want to say是从句做主语了 也就是what 引导的主语从句
至于that 引导的是宾语从句
是从句套从句
不过我也觉得那个that用whether好些

你是想说:“我会在核对你说的是否合理之后再给你”吗??
如果是的话你最好用: I will give it to you after (my) checking what you said is logical or not

that 改 whether

没有错~that 引导一个宾语从句(what you want to say is logical ,这句是check的宾语),what引导一个主语从句(what you want to say是宾语从句what you want to say is logical 的主语 )

没有错,但that常常省掉,尤其是口语