In one day,If You will find i have changed as you have made a mistake on me at the outset.这句话对吗?顺便说明理由并说明中文意思,
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In one day,If You will find i have changed as you have made a mistake on me at the outset.
这句话对吗?顺便说明理由并说明中文意思,
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不对。one day 前不加in,if条件状语从句内用现在时，不加will,on改为about 。但如用if,as,则此句不全，若不改全句，则去if
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有语病额~表示总有一天用one day ，不用加介词in，if用来表设想，而这个设想可以发生也可以不发生，所以不用will
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有一天，如果你发现我已经变了，是因为你当初对我犯了一个错误。
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肯定不对啦，这个句子不完整，if 引导的是个从句，as引导的是另一个从句，两个从句怎么能成句呢？
One day , you will find that I have changed because of the mistake you have made on me at the outset.
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这句话应改为One day ,you will find that I have changed because of the mistake you have made on me at the outset.