In one day,If You will find i have changed as you have made a mistake on me at the outset.这句话对吗?顺便说明理由并说明中文意思,

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In one day,If You will find i have changed as you have made a mistake on me at the outset.
这句话对吗?顺便说明理由并说明中文意思,

不对。one day 前不加in,if条件状语从句内用现在时,不加will,on改为about 。但如用if,as,则此句不全,若不改全句,则去if

有语病额~表示总有一天用one day ,不用加介词in,if用来表设想,而这个设想可以发生也可以不发生,所以不用will

有一天,如果你发现我已经变了,是因为你当初对我犯了一个错误。

肯定不对啦,这个句子不完整,if 引导的是个从句,as引导的是另一个从句,两个从句怎么能成句呢?
One day , you will find that I have changed because of the mistake you have made on me at the outset.

这句话应改为One day ,you will find that I have changed because of the mistake you have made on me at the outset.