“During Mid-autumn Day’s holiday the company will be closed for three days”这句话有没有语病?谢若有的话该怎么修正呢?谢谢诸位指教了

问题描述:

“During Mid-autumn Day’s holiday the company will be closed for three days”这句话有没有语病?谢
若有的话该怎么修正呢?谢谢诸位指教了

It should be:
Company will close three days during the Mid-autumn festival.

During Mid-autumn Day holiday the company will be closed for three days
Mid-autumn Day 后不加`s

语病应该没有,不过读起来怪怪的
个人意见:
The company will have a vacation for three days during the Mid-Autumn Festival holiday.
另外公司关门不能简单翻译为be closed

Day 就有“节”的意思,此处与“holiday”重复。
建议使用:
During the Mid-Autumn Festival, the company will take a holiday for three days.