Today ,I went to the Shanghai Ninth People's hospital to see the dentist.求指点语法错误写了一段日记,求指点语法错误:Today ,I went to the Shanghai Ninth People's hospital to see the dentist.Because i have several cavities.Actually,I knew my teeth have decayed before one year ago.But I am afraid to see dentist,so I delayed to see the doctor until now.I took a bus then transfer the subway line 4 to go to the hospital.After registered,I saw the dentist,but she just made an ap

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Today ,I went to the Shanghai Ninth People's hospital to see the dentist.求指点语法错误
写了一段日记,求指点语法错误:
Today ,I went to the Shanghai Ninth People's hospital to see the dentist.Because i have several cavities.Actually,I knew my teeth have decayed before one year ago.But I am afraid to see dentist,so I delayed to see the doctor until now.
I took a bus then transfer the subway line 4 to go to the hospital.After registered,I saw the dentist,but she just made an appointment for me to remedy my teeth next time.