做个短文改错!越快越好I'm very glad to hear from you.In your last letter you...做个短文改错!越快越好I'm very glad to hear from you.In your last letter you ask about the post-80s in China.Actually am the boy who belongs to this group.Comparing with our parents,life for us is getting much hard.The job market is tough and the house is expensively to afford.Now many girls prefer to marry with a man who owns a house and a car.Therefore,I don't think love built on house and car
做个短文改错!越快越好I'm very glad to hear from you.In your last letter you...
做个短文改错!越快越好I'm very glad to hear from you.In your last letter you ask about the post-80s in China.Actually am the boy who belongs to this group.Comparing with our parents,life for us is getting much hard.The job market is tough and the house is expensively to afford.Now many girls prefer to marry with a man who owns a house and a car.Therefore,I don't think love built on house and cars is true love,and I doubt how long it will last.As a matter of fact,though situations are tough today ,a lot of we post-80s are making great efforts live a good life.I believe we will have a nice future.十处错误
Actually am中间少个I 不算 那是我丢的
too expensive to afford
to marry a man
am:is
who:that
Comparing:Comparted
much:more
expensively:expensive
marry:marrying
house:houses
and:or
we:us
live:to live
hear——hearing
Actually am ——Actually i am
Comparing——compared
much hard——much harder
expensively没有这个用法
marry with —— marry to
love——love that
we——our
efforts live ——efforts to live
只能看出来这么多,抱歉!
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