英语作文：Why I come to college?结构：三段式：1.Introduction.要有主题.（最多不超过三句）2.Body.3.Conclusion.一、 Introduction 要有修辞语；运用从句.开头以“My coming to college is for……”三个原因用三个名词短语.二、 Body 正文（要有承上启下词）最好加上一句Topic sentence注意语法!三、 Conclusion.

When I was still a little boy, I was told that I had better go to college when I grow up. At that time I did not know why my parents had such a big hope on me. What I knew was that a college was a big school with a nice campus, a large library full of great books, many learned professors and smart students. And I wished that I could play there one day. That would be a lot of fun.
Several years later, when I was in the last term of my five-year primary school, Father said to me, “ You should study hard, or you will not be accepted by the best middle school in our town.” I understood his words. To study at the best middle school meant more opportunities of being admitted by the best high school in the city not far from our village, in turns, this meant more chances of being enrolled by key colleges or universities in Fathers eyes. Father was strict with me in my study. So I worked hard. Soon I succeeded in entering that school with excellent performance.
At that middle school, I learned a lot. I found that I was a poor student. Some of my classmates from rather rich family always wore nice clothes, ate nice food and dishes. But I, as a boy from a farmer family, was poorly dressed and what I ate was also poor. I learned that the only way for me to change the terrible condition was to get a college degree. Otherwise, I would become a ordinary farmer like my parents. I did not like working in the fields day after day, year in and year out. So I began to make my own decision. And from then on to go to college become one of aims.
After three years learning at middle school, I was accepted by the best high school. Father was pretty happy. He said one of my feet was already in some key university. I was happy too because this meant I was much nearer to my final aim. I worked much harder than before. I told myself that the final success was in sight. In the meantime, l read a lot of biographies of VIP, such as Zhu De, Zhou Enlai, etc. Abahem Lincoln left a deep impression on me perhaps because he and I had the same family background. Then, he became my hero. I was determined to follow his example and be a lawyer, if possible, a president, too. Since I read Lincolns story, I started to know the real importance of education for a mans fate. I decided to receive college education, no matter how hard it will be or at what cost.
Time passed so quickly. Soon three years study at high school came to an end. I walked into a famous university in our province with excitement and delight. Father was so excited that he was in tears. He said I fulfilled his life long dream, but he did not know I realized my own dream, too.
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Why do people go to college?
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Why do people go to college?
It is always the same question: What will I do after I finished school? For many reasons students choose the academic career. But why do many prefer going to college? Is it all about money or knowledge?
Many parents groom their children for a career in an academic field where they earn a lot of money and get acceptance. This surety is important for them to know that their children will have social security.
This is often not to be influenced by the children, because they have never looked out for anything else than a doctor title and fortune. From the first grade, they had to be the class’ best and were never confronted with any other perspective.
To make it clear: Children of for example physicians very often study medicine.
Another reason for studying is the higher probability for a better work than students who decide to make a vocational education. In a corporation higher graduated degrees are more in demand.
Some students do not fit in any of the abovementioned schemes. They just do not want to go to work yet. They live their life to the full as long as possible. If they work, they will not be able to enjoy their lives. According to the motto: Living like a bee in clover! As long as they study, they do not have to work and the real life can wait.
A minority is left. Those who really want to study, because they are hungry for knowledge.
They cannot wait for more information to fill their brains with. They enjoy what they are doing and know what they want. Studying is their self-fulfilment like for other playing football. Those students are looking forward for every exam and they are the only ones who like the lecturers. That’s why they are always the best ones, because they like what they do.
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Why do people go to college?
It is always the same question: What will I do after I finished/FINISH/HAVE FINISHED school? For many reasons students choose the/AN academic career. But why do many prefer /TO GO going to college? Is it all about money or knowledge?
Many parents groom their children for a career in an academic field where they earn a lot of money and get acceptance/ACCEPTED BY SOCIETY. This surety is important for them to know that their children will have social security./SECURITY IN LIFE
This is often not to be influenced/OFTEN NOT CONSIDERED BY by the children, because they have never looked out for anything else than/ANYTHING EXCEPT GETTING A DOCTORATE a doctor title and fortune. From the first grade, they had to be the class’ best /THE BEST IN THE CLASS and were never confronted with any other perspective/OUTLOOK.
To make it clear: Children of for example physicians very often study medicine.
Another reason for studying is the higher probability for/OF a better work/JOB than students who decide to make a /OPT FOR vocational education. In a corporation higher graduated degrees/HIGHER DEGREES are more in demand.
Some students do not fit inTO any of the abovementioned schemes. They just do not want to go to work yet. They live their life to the full as long as possible. If they work, they will not be able to enjoy their lives. According to the motto: Living like a bee in clover!/IN HONEY As long as they study, they do not have to work and real life can wait.
A minority is left. Those who really want to study, because they are hungry for knowledge.
They cannot wait for more information to fill their brains with. They enjoy what they are doing and know what they want. Studying is their self-fulfilment like IT IS for otherS playing football. Those students are looking forward for/TO every exam and they are the only ones who like the lecturers. That’s why they are always the best ones, because they like what they do. All in all, it is always an advantage to study. Not only for personal knowledge, it is a good experience for life. Students have to learn by themselves to be organized, punctual and studious to achieve one’s/THEIR aim. A perfect preparation for the/A future profession.
All in all, it is always an advantage to study. Not only for personal knowledge, it is a good experience for life. Students have to learn by themselves to be organized, punctual and studious to achieve one’s aim. A perfect preparation for the future profession.

首先,我觉得你的题目有错误,应该为：Why do I come to college?My coming to college is for my dream, more knowledges and doing more contribulations to our country.[这里是你想要的三饿名词短语,分别是实现我...