英语作文,急用啊 某英语报社纸向广大中学生征稿,题目是The future life.请对未来生活展开想象好的话追加分数

I think the future life will be interesting and colorful. Everybody will carry a pocket computer which can make their life easy and colorful because the computer will give people the answers to all their problems. We shall all have telephones in our pockets,too. And we'll be able to talke and see our friends. Machines and robots will do most of the work so people will have more free time. They will be able to fly to the moon or live in the water.