Don't want to be at home ,don't want to go back to school .这句话有语法或者其他上的错误吗!请高手指教...

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Don't want to be at home ,don't want to go back to school .
这句话有语法或者其他上的错误吗!请高手指教...

这里是两句话,而且两个don't好啰嗦,不如
Don't want to be at home ,and neither do you want to go back to school .

没有主语I, 如果想口语化一点,这个句子又说得不太地道
连接词也没有,可以改成:
I don't wanna stay at home; don't wanna go back to school, neither.

没有错误.如果写成Don't want to be at home,and don't want to go back to school neither.的形式可能更好一点.
有一个小问题就是:这句话没有主语.如果没有上下文的话会造成歧义.英语一般是不能省略主语的.