请问She told us her hope that she would become a pianist.改为这样可以吗?

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请问She told us her hope that she would become a pianist.改为这样可以吗?
改成这样可以吗?She told us that shehope thatshe would become a pianist.

你这个句子里从句太多,有点罗嗦,应该改成
She told us that she hoped to become a pianist.
她告诉我们她希望成为一名钢琴家.
这个句子只剩一个宾语从句,从句中后面用不定式作宾语.
有不明白的请继续追问,嗯,谢谢,顺便问一下,请问这个样呢?She told us her hope is that she would become a pianist也可以吧,不过还是宾语从句中又带一个表语从句,总之比你前一个理顺多了。