看看这句英文我写的对不对?Relaxing is necessary if you feel tired.

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看看这句英文我写的对不对?
Relaxing is necessary if you feel tired.

对了

改成 It is necessary to relax when you feel tired.

Relaxation is necessary when you feel tired.Relaxation是名词,是放松,休息的意思.应把if 该为when,译为当累的时候.

对是对,但感觉很别扭。
非谓语动词即动名词在这里做从句的主语,有点...