这句英文有错吗?while the most of children like snow but the most of adults hate it

while和but不同用，就像（al）though和but不能同用。一个是从句，另一个是并列句，语法结构上无此用法

有，while和but不能连用。并且most前不能用the
建议改成Although most children like snow,most of adults hate it.

两处错
while 引导让步句时不可以和but 连用,所以,应该说：
Most children like snow ,but most  adults hate it
或者：
While most children like snow ,most adults hate it
the most of children（adults) 要改为most children,（adults) 或者most of the children（adults)