这篇文章有语法错误吗?Tt's my brithday today.My friend and I had a very nice brithday party.At frist,we went out and bougth something that we need for the party.When we come back ,everything was ready.After all day's prepartion,the brithday party began.We helped ourselves and enjoyed the music and the nice food at the party.My friend gave me a present which I want for a long time.After my friend left,I didn't play the computer games as before,because it was goin

这篇文章有语法错误吗?
Tt's my brithday today.My friend and I had a very nice brithday party.At frist,we went out and bougth something that we need for the party.When we come back ,everything was ready.
After all day's prepartion,the brithday party began.We helped ourselves and enjoyed the music and the nice food at the party.My friend gave me a present which I want for a long time.After my friend left,I didn't play the computer games as before,because it was going to a new begin.