大家帮我看看,这句话有没有语病,有的话顺便修改一下~Spring approaches,the remnant snow not melts,goes by car to the suburb village,may ride a horse pulls the sled goes through between the maple tree forest.

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大家帮我看看,这句话有没有语病,有的话顺便修改一下~
Spring approaches,the remnant snow not melts,goes by car to the suburb village,may ride a horse pulls the sled goes through between the maple tree forest.

你不如把中文原句给我来翻译
春天临近,积雪尚未融化
乘车去郊外小村落
然后呢