短文改错一篇

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短文改错一篇
one day ,a blind man was sitting on street with a sign by his feet that read :I am blind ,please help me.A gentleman walked through and stopped to have a look at the sign ,noticed only a few coin in the men's hat .He took out some bills from his wallet and put it into the hat .And then he turned the sign over again .Wrote a new message and left .Several hours later ,the genleman returned .To his happy ,he found the hat almost full of bills and coins.He didn't expect that the new message does work,which read:It's spring now,and i can not see it

第1排:sitting on the street第2排:walked by; noticed改成noticing; coin加s 第3排:men's 改成man's;it改成them第4排:again去掉第5排:happy改成happiness;does改成did最后一排:and改成but 楼上那个the hat ...