This is my first time to write an English e-mail.I came across your magazine about two months before and I loved it from
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This is my first time to write an English e-mail.I came across your magazine about two months before and I loved it from the first moment.…………
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楼主为什么不把全文打出来呢?请补充问题吧.改正如下（错误在括号处注明）：This is my first time to write an English e-mail.I came across your magazine about two months (before改成ago) and I loved it from ...