帮我改一篇短文改错,谢了!
帮我改一篇短文改错,谢了!
After 5 years away in my hometown,I find that
The neighborhood which I used to living in has changed
a lot.The Sichuan Restaurant and the older fish shop
across the street from our middle school were gone
There exsit now a park that has a small river running
through.The factory at the corner of Friendship Street and
Zhongshan Road has been moved out of the city,and sports
center has been built in their place . the market at the corner of
Friendship Street and Xinhua Road has been given way to
a supermarket.Besides the bookstore next top our middle school
1.in 改为 from away from表示离开家乡 2.living 改为 live used to do 表示过去做某事3.older 改为old 这里不需要用比较级,因为没有更年轻的店4.from 改为next to 街道和学校之间不能用from5.exist 改为exists 主语...