When we seeing from the top of the mountain,the lake looks beautiful.这句对吗能不能把when省略而去,

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When we seeing from the top of the mountain,the lake looks beautiful.这句对吗
能不能把when省略而去,

应该要省略when,因为独立主格结构是两部分组成,前一部份是名词或者代词,后一部分是非谓语动词(不定式、动名词和分词)或形容词、副词、或介词短语.