请帮忙看看这段英文正确么?Responsible for leading the company’s finance function and establishing

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请帮忙看看这段英文正确么?Responsible for leading the company’s finance function and establishing

负责领导公司的金融部门的建立和功能的发挥

负责领导公司的财务功能和创建

额,你要完整的句子还是?
functions,运作,此处做动词,要用动名词形式,
finance修饰名词,最好用形容词financial
如果是祈使句,加 Be responsible for leading the company’s finance function and establishing
整个变成Be responsible for leading the company’s financial functioning and establishing .