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请高手帮看看是否有语法错误或语句不通顺的情况
In recent years,with the implementation of educational reform,our middle schools have carried out new teaching materials and issued the new curriculum standards.In the new course,the middle school teaching was meeting unprecedented opportunities and challenges.The thesis was on the premise of new chemistry curriculum standards,through the ways of standardizing test operation,popularizing miniature chemical experiment,strengthening drug recycling to reuse ,and performing green chemistry experimental improvement and designing to cultivate the environmental awareness of students among high school chemical experiment teaching,thus to enhance the environmental awareness of students and to establish a correct scientific concept of development.In addition,this paper introduces in detail the significance of carrying out environmental protection consciousness in Chemistry Experiment Teaching in senior high school and the implementation of environmental protection measures.Finally,the prospects for the implementation of high school chemistry teaching consciousness of environmental protection are discussed.
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近年来,中国高中推行新教材,颁发了新课程标准,实行教育改革。新教材新课程,高中教学的开展遇到了前所未有的机遇和挑战。文章以新课标化学为前提,在高中化学实验教学中通过规范学生实验操作、推广微型化学实验、加强药物回收处理并进行药物重复利用,以及化学实验的绿色化改进与设计等方面进行培养学生的环保意识的教学实践,从而提高了学生的环保意识并树立正确的科学发展观。其中,文章尤其详细介绍了在高中化学实验教学中推行环保意识的重大意义,并且列举了几点推行环保意识的相关举措。最后,文章对推行环保意识的高中化学教学前景进行了展望。

1、原文从第三行开始应该用现在时态与第十行的this paper introduces 的时态吻合.
2、第五、六行小错,operation(s),experiment(s),through the ways of 简单改为by...,performing 前的and 去掉,thus to 改为 thus enhancing ...and establishing 并列,分词引导结果状语.
希望有所帮助.时态吻合,没看懂,直接说咋个改吧through the ways of 简单改为by,这个可以吗。。。。?the thesis was 改为 is.这句末的逗号去掉,through the ways of 改为by... 表方式引导四个动作,所以要把performing 前的and 去掉,最后这句由thus enhancing .... 引出结果状语。The thesis is on the premise of new chemistry curriculum standards by standardizing test operations, popularizing miniature chemical experiments, strengthening drug recycling to reuse ,performing green chemistry experimental improvements and designing to cultivate the environmental awareness of students among high school chemical experiment teaching, thusenhancing the environmental awareness of students andestablishinga correct scientific concept of development.