帮我看看下面几个句子,错了帮我更正下.最好是连成分一起分析下（错误或不好的句子）

帮我看看下面几个句子,错了帮我更正下.最好是连成分一起分析下（错误或不好的句子）
1.Coffee came to play an increasingly important role in our life.
2.Life is always full of surprises,and some people enjoy them while others choose the opposite way .人的一生中总是充满了惊喜,有些人很是喜欢,而有些人却不以为然
3.有充分的理由支持如下.
The view are supported by sound reasons as follows.
4.Before giving my opinion,I think it is essential to look at the argument on both sides.
要表明我的观点之前,我想有必要分析比方的论点
5.Air is indispensable to life.
空气是生命所必需的.
Everybody has a dream,I am no exception,每个人都有一个梦想,我也不例外
6 Whereas,it also brings negative effects .
反之,也会带来负面影响.
7.利远远大于弊
the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.
8 So,you never know where this road may lead to.
所以.你永远不知道这条路将领你通往何方
9 A sense of responsibility of a talent is a person of respect.
一个有责任感的人才是一个令人敬佩的人