请问有无语序和用词错误(小问题就算了),--his view draws some discussed by people

问题描述:

请问有无语序和用词错误(小问题就算了),--his view draws some discussed by people

His view draws some discussion by people.
译文:他的观点引起了人们的讨论.
修改:discussed —— discussion
原因:应该用名词的形式