这句英语语法运用上对吗With the schoolbag on my back and the bicycle beneath my hip,I keep cycling to the school on the way to the new term.

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这句英语语法运用上对吗
With the schoolbag on my back and the bicycle beneath my hip,I keep cycling to the school on the way to the new term.

school前the应该去掉.剩下的语法基本没问题,但意思上感觉怪怪的,the bicycle beneath my hip这句直接用by bike 更好