请帮忙看一下下面这段话是否通顺、正确,有没有语法错误,
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请帮忙看一下下面这段话是否通顺、正确,有没有语法错误,
Today ,it’s new year that Chinese traditional festival,I just represent myself say happy new year to everyone!In a past year ,we've got a lot of harvest,all of this couldn't depart with your work hard,so I proposal that let's us hold the goblet,to wish the next year willbe better!Cheers!
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Today ,it’s Chinese New years day.(这里这麼说就行了,外国人懂什麽是Chinese new year). I would like to represent myself tosay happy new year toeveryone! In the past year , we got a good harvest,all...