英语短文,求纠错

问题描述:

英语短文,求纠错
It's wrong to laugh at a soldier who spoke and acted inconveniemcely in his procession.It is like insulting a man whose hands and feet were bound
去嘲笑一名在队伍中说话和行动不方便的士兵是错误的,那就像是侮辱一名被绑住手和脚的人
其实我也不知道有没有错,只是想证明一下,

我觉得没错~