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英语太差 肯定错很多 .请大侠帮忙看看.
写的是关于小沈阳的一篇英语作文帮改下
Do you know xiao shen yang?Chinese name and English names call Xiao shen yang of that person.seen spring Festival Gala you'll know.He in 2009,famous for not less money.Because of his sketch which not less money.received a lot ofpeople like.and obtain comicskit but as a child,he was very difficult.He born in peasant family.he was very poor condition but he did't give up his favorrite errenzhuan(二人转- - 不知道是不是这样写）Finally.through their own efforts become Zhao ben shan disciple.This is the fundamental cause of his success.I also like him.错的肯定很多- - 第一次自己写
Do you know Xiao Shenyang?His Chinese and English are all the same.If you had seen spring Festival Gala then you'll know him.He became famous in 2009 and earned a lot of money.He was famous by drama.A lot of people like it.he was very poor when he was young.He born in peasant .Although he was poor he did't give up his favorrite subject:song-and-dance duet.Finally.For his own efforts,He became Zhao ben shan's disciple.This is the the basic factor that cause of his success.I like him very much.(累死我了）