找个人翻译一下,说下哪里有错误
找个人翻译一下,说下哪里有错误
Do you know Planting Trees Day? On this day,many people are going to plant some trees.Last weekend, my family with me went to Zhongshan Park to plant some tees.It was very tired but happy.My father was plant the trees, and my mother was watered the trees, I was seeing my father and mother do this and learnt a lot about it.We all know that our city become dirtier anddirtier, but why don't we push our hands to save enviroment?Planting Trees is a good way to save the enviroment,let's go and try our best to protect the environment and plant more trees.I believe our city will more beautiful one day. 翻译一下,在找下错误
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你知道植树节吗?在这天,许多人都回去植树.上周末,我的家人和我一起去中山公园植树了,虽然很累可是很开心.我爸爸负责种树,妈妈浇水,而我站在旁边看着学到了血多.我们都已经感觉到我们的城市变得越来越脏乱了,那么我们为什么不携起手来保护我们的环境呢?种树是一种很好的保护方式,所以,赶紧行动起来尽我们最大努力保护环境,多多种树,这样我相信我们的城市明天会更好!
更正原文：
Do you know Planting Trees Day（Tree Planting Day 或者arbor day才是植树节正确表达）?On this day,many people (are going to不要,用一般现在时就行) plant （some习惯表达直接说plant trees） trees.Last weekend,my family with me（我们全家就是our family,一定要加我主语应该用I） went to Zhongshan Park to plant some（同上plant trees） trees.It（I,人才能感觉高兴和累） was very tired but happy.My father was plant（was不要,就用planted 一般过去式） the trees,and my mother was watered（watered同上） the trees,I was（just watched them我就看着他们 ）seeing my father and mother do this and learnt a lot about it.We all know that our city become dirtier anddirtier,but why don't we push our hands（携起手来join hands） to save（our） enviroment?Planting Trees is a good way to save the enviroment,let's go（行动起来时Let'do it) and try our best to protect the environment and(and 不要,用by planting表用种树手段来保护环境) plant more trees.（In that way,这样一来,加个连接词句子才更通顺）I believe our city will（be系动词不能丢)more beautiful one day.