帮忙找出错的语法

问题描述:

帮忙找出错的语法
Ana Garcia,the heroine of the film.She was a senior high school student.Ana was raised up in America,by the American education; she wanted the better way to realize the things.Her mother was selfish; she did not want to break up with the family,so she did not agree with her daughter’s thoughts.

Ana Garcia,the heroine of the film,was a senior high school student.Ana was raised in America under American education.She wanted better ways to realize things.Her mother was selfish who did not want ...